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    Showdown returns and the camera is on the announcers’ booth.

    Tenay: Fans, during the commercial break, Carlito, still upset from his loss to Chris Benoit, was wandering the halls when he ran into fellow LSW Superstar Jay Lethal.

    Video of Carlito walking through the hallways of the arena, cursing under his breath plays with “During the Commercial Break” in the bottom left corner. Carlito is walking when he passes Jay Lethal, who is stretching for his match tonight with Christian Cage in the Fusion Division Tournament. Carlito is still mumbling when he looks up and sees Lethal. The two make eye contact and Carlito pauses.

    Carlito: What are you looking at?

    Lethal: Nothing man, nothing. Just keep walking along.

    Carlito shakes his head and keeps walking away and Lethal laughs to himself. He bends down, stretching his hamstrings, when all of a sudden Carlito kicks Lethal in the back of the head, knocking Lethal’s head into the cold, concrete floor. Carlito keeps stomping on Lethal as he screams in anger.

    Carlito: You wanna laugh at Carlito. You wanna laugh? Carlito’ll show you.

    Carlito rolls Lethal over and begins hammering right hands on him. Finally, a swarm of refs come and grab Carlito, pulling him off Lethal.


    Tenay: As you could see, Carlito just snapped. He’s simply being a child and can’t handle the fact he lost cleanly to Chris Benoit.

    Heymen: Did you ever think that Carlito doesn’t like being laughed at by a punk like Jay Lethal?

    Tenay: The kid wasn’t even laughing at Carlito. He was stretching for his match, which he may not even be able to compete in tonight because of Carlito. Fans, we’ll keep you up to date on Jay Lethal’s condition leading into his match with Cage tonight but now it’s time for what will no doubt be a brutal Iron Division Match as Finlay takes on William Regal.

    Heymen: This match has everything to be special. These two smash mouth brawlers in the Iron Division environment is gonna be memorable.

    Royal Music fills The Alamo as William Regal walks out to a mixed reaction, though it’s mostly jeers. Regal is wearing a nasty sneer on his face as he makes his way to the ring. He climbs up the steps and wipes his feet before climbing into the ring. Regal removes his robe and waits. “My Name’s Finlay…and I LOVE to Fight”…The Irish music of the Fighting Irishman plays, and Finlay comes out in as foul a mood as ever. Finlay climbs in and the ref calls for the bell.

    Iron Division Tournament: Round One
    William Regal vs. Finlay


    The match is a pure smash mouth brawl. Regal and Finlay give each other everything they’ve got. They match is even through the whole thing, but Regal scores the surprise win after drilling Finlay with a stiff knee to the head, knocking Finlay out!

    winner via TKO and advancing in the Iron Division Tournament, William Regal

    (Tenay: What a brutal match. You know these two were going to go to war.)

    (Heymen: William Regal’s royal demeanor often detracts from just how violent he is. He and Finlay are equals, but tonight, William Regal was better. That shot to the head was just unreal.)

    Regal raises his hands victoriously. Finlay holds his neck in pain as Regal stalks him. Suddenly, Regal begins stomping on the back of Finlay’s neck until the ref finally makes him stop. Regal leaves the ring and argues with some fans as he walks to the back.

    The camera cuts backstage to Jay Lethal, who has a trainer holding an ice pack on the back of Lethal’s neck as a doctor shines a light in Lethal’s dazed eyes.

    Doctor: I’m sorry Mr. Lethal, I don’t think you should be wrestling. I’m going to have to…

    Lethal stands up quickly and the doctor follows, making sure Lethal doesn’t fall.

    Lethal: The hell with that, doc. I’ll be fine. I’m not going to miss out on my chance…

    Lethal walks away as the doctor looks at him and shakes his head with a concerned look on his face.

    The camera cuts backstage where Maria is standing by with a cocky looking Christian Cage.

    Maria: I’m standing next to former NWA Heavyweight Champion Christian Cage, who is just moments away from facing Jay Lethal in a first round Fusion Division Championship match. Christian, how do you feel knowing your opponent was beaten down earlier tonight and isn’t at 100%?

    Christian smirks before grabbing the mic. He shoves Maria by her face, knocking her out of the picture.

    Christian: I don’t need your help you retarded, two-bit tramp.

    Christian looks into the camera and his face gets gravely serious.

    Christian: Do I care about facing an injured man like Jay Lethal. No, not at all. Why? Because he could come into that ring at 400%, and he still wouldn’t be half the man Christian Cage is. See, it’s a joke I’m not in the Main Event tonight going for the LSW Heavyweight Championship. Shawn, I know you’re listening, so I want you to tip that gay little cowboy hat and listen closely: I’m going to win the Fusion Division Championship. And I’m gonna hurt anyone who gets in my way. And if I don’t get a title shot then, I’m going to just have to win the Iron Division Championship. And if that doesn’t work, I’ll keep putting people on the shelf night in, night out, until you finally realize you can’t hide true greatness. You can’t bury god-given talent. Just remember Shawn, all this is on your head, not mine.

    Christian throws the mic down and walks out of our view.

    (Tenay: Strong, strong words from one Christian Cage.)

    (Heymen: I’ve known Christian for many years now, and he’s always a force in the ring. But when he feels he’s been insulted, he can be dangerous. Well that’s exactly what Shawn Michaels has done.)

    (Tenay: That can be argued, but fans, we’ll be right back. Stay tuned.)

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    Dramatic music plays as we see highlights of the LSW Superstars.

    Three Days…

    Highlights of the Battle at the Alamo tournament plays

    Twenty Four Men…

    We see different entrances of the LSW Superstars and celebrations from various winners

    One Champion…

    John Cena raises the LSW Heavyweight Title over his head. The screen cuts to various scenes of him celebrating when suddenly the music stops and the screen goes black and white. The screen shows Jericho behind Cena, waiting with a chair.

    And The Return of a Legend…

    We see Jericho crack John Cena with the steel chair, busting the new champion open. As Jericho stands proud, we can hear Tenay shouting “What the hell is Chris Jericho doing here?”

    LSW Battle at the Alamo. A special 3 disc DVD documenting the tournament that revolutionized wrestling as we know it. Available everywhere where DVDs are sold next Tuesday.


    The camera returns to the announcers booth.

    Tenay: What a weekend it was. In all my years in this sport, crowning the LSW Champion was one of the most exciting things I’ve ever seen. But now, it’s time for another Fusion Division Tournament match.

    “Close Your Eyes” by Waterproof Blonde plays, and the erupt into a chorus of boos as Christian Cage steps through the curtain. He peaks out from underneath his hood and kisses his finger, pointing out at the crowd. He gets down to the ring and steps onto the middle turnbuckle. He flips off his hood and pats his chest, ready to go. “Push It” by Static X plays, and Jay Lethal staggers out onto the stage. He seems a little dazed, but walks to the ring none the less. His head is bandaged and he’s obviously not in any kind of wrestling shape. He climbs in and the ref goes up to him and checks to see if he can go. Lethal looks up at him with a vacant look, but manages to tell the ref he’s ok. The ref calls for the bell.

    Fusion Division Tournament: Match One
    Christian Cage vs. Jay Lethal


    Lethal is so dazed, that he can’t even dodge Christian as he drills him with a knee to the gut. Christian grabs Jay Lethal by the hand and gives him a BRUTAL short arm clothesline. Lethal’s out, but the Christian doesn’t care. He lifts Lethal up again and for no reason, gives him the Unprettier, slamming his head hard into the canvas. Christian covers Lethal non chalantly for the pin.

    winner via pinfall, Christian Cage

    (Tenay: Well, Christian Cage wins this one, but Jay Lethal didn’t even have a chance. He shouldn’t of even been out there after the beating Carlito gave him, but that’s just a testament to Lethal’s drive to succeed.)

    (Heymen: Yeah, yeah, yeah; Jay Lethal was hurt. But who got the “W”? That man right there, Christian Cage. And tomorrow, that’s all that will matter.)

    Christian raises his hand in the ring proudly, as Lethal lies motionless on the ground. Cage looks at him and pats his chest, pointing out at his peeps with an arrogant smile. Christian leaves the ring as medics rush down and help Jay Lethal out of the ring.

    (Tenay: We now take you backstage to the lovely Maria who’s standing by with the man who returned last night, Chris Jericho.)

    The camera cuts backstage to the two.

    Maria: Chris Jericho, last night you returned to the wrestling spotlight for the first time in over a year and a half, only to attack John Cena. Tonight you’re in a number one contender’s match…what are your thoughts?

    Jericho just shakes his head before answering.

    Jericho: Do you ever get tired of being an absolute imbecile every week? Look at me. I’m wearing $500 leather pants. Why? Because the last thing I expected was a match tonight. I’m not prepared, I haven’t been in a ring for 18 months and tonight, I’ve got one chance to get my hands on John Cena so that I can rip everything away from him. So how do I feel? What are my thoughts? I feel phenomenal. Because I can go in there with one hand tied behind my back and beat Edge or “The Stinger” because I’m Chris Jericho. I’m a Living Legend. I’m God Damn King of the…

    Jericho stops when suddenly a black bat nearly hits him in the head. Jericho stares down the end of it as the camera pans back revealing Sting to a HUGE ovation. Jericho leans back, staring at Sting, and Maria has an even bigger smile. Sting rests the bat on his shoulder and steps closer.

    Sting: You need to watch your mouth, son.

    Jericho smirks at Sting.

    Sting: See Chris, the way the Stinger sees it, you don’t deserve to be in this match but I know all about bad blood. See, I’ve got a little bit of bad blood boiling in my heart. I was the last NWA Heavyweight Champion and I had full intentions on being the first LSW Heavyweight Champion. Now that that opportunity has passed me by, I guess I’ll have to settle for being the second. And if that means beating you, Edge, or anyone else, well…that’s fine by me. Because tonight…It’s SHOWTIME!

    Sting walks away as Jericho continues smirking at the legend.

    (Tenay: Some tension between those two men, but after this commercial break it’s the Main Event. Sting vs. Chris Jericho vs. Edge. Stay tuned!)

    Commercial

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    Showdown returns and we immediately hear “Metalingus” by Alter Bridge. The entire crowd boos as Edge walks out confidently. He slides into the ring and stands on a turnbuckle examining the crowd. He hops off and removes his jacket when “Seek and Destroy” plays. Sting walks out to a HUMONGOUS ovation. He gives a loud “WHOOO” as he walks to the ring full of life. Sting and Edge mouth off to each other when we suddenly hear “King of my World” by Saliva. Chris Jericho walks out after a few minutes to huge heat (though there’s select cheers). Jericho is still in his leather pants but he looks in surprisingly good shape. He walks to the ring arrogantly and does his trademark entrance on the apron. He climbs in and the ref goes to call for the bell when we hear “Basic Thuganomics.” The LSW Heavyweight Champion John Cena walks out to a good ovation as all three men in the ring watch him. He walks to the announcer’s table, making gestures to the other wrestlers to “calm down” as he sits down.

    Cena: Wassup Tenay, Paulie.

    Heyman: It’s Paul.

    Tenay: We weren’t expecting you, champ, but I guess you’re here for a close look at the three men who are gunning for your title?

    Cena: You’re damn straight. I mean, we’ve got three premier athletes in the ring, I just wanna know how far over my head I am.

    Number One Contender’s Match
    Edge vs. Sting vs. Chris Jericho


    Edge immediately attacks Sting, still angry over losing last night. Jericho watches as the two go at it, with Sting getting the better of Edge. Jericho watches calmly as Sting turns towards him. Jericho quickly rushes and nails Sting with a running enziguri, knocking him down. Edge slides in and attacks Jericho from behind quickly. The match continues to go back and forth between all men, with each teaming with an opponent for a 2 on 1 situation. The end sees Jericho knocked down with a Scorpion Death Drop, when Edge spears Sting. Edge covers, but Sting kicks out. Edge is in disbelief and sets up for the Downward Spiral, but Sting elbows out of it. Sting goes for a clothesline, but Edge ducks it. He grabs Sting and goes for the Downward Spiral and nails it! Edge goes to roll Sting over when out of nowhere, Jericho drop kicks Edge right in his head as Edge’s is on his knees! Edge falls flat and Jericho covers Sting for the one…two…three.

    winner via pinfall, and Number One Contender for the LSW Heavyweight Championship, Chris Jericho

    (Tenay: My God! Chris Jericho has done it! He’s the number one contender for John Cena’s championship title.)

    (Heyman: I hate to say I saw this coming, but I saw this coming. Chris Jericho is here for one reason, destroy John Cena. I don’t think that passion and desire could possibly lose.)

    Jericho raises his hands victoriously as his music begins playing. Jericho stands up and sees John Cena, with his title on his shoulder, applauding. Jericho points at Cena and starts mouthing at him, yelling at him to get in the ring.

    Cena: Aw hell. I guess we ain’t even gonna wait, are we?

    Cena takes his headset off and sets his title down on the table. He removes his shirt and steps around the table when suddenly security and a swarm of refs come running down and stop Cena from getting in the ring. Cena is fighting at first but calms himself down. Jericho brushes the hair out of his face as he stares at the blockade between he and Cena. Suddenly, Cena rushes full speed and split the refs and slides into the ring. Cena sweeps out Jericho’s feet and starts hammering him with right hands. Jericho rolls on top of Cena and begins firing his own punches. The refs and security slide into the ring and manage to break the two apart again. The separate them to opposite corners when somehow, Jericho gets free and jumps over the security holding Cena back, continuing the brawl. It‘s shortlived though, as security quickly separates them again. The crowd is going nuts as Jericho and Cena scream at the other one.

    (Tenay: It’s complete madness! Can the LSW contain both John Cena and Chris Jericho? We’ll see you all next week. For Paul Heymen, I’m “Iron” Mike Tenay. Good night.)

    The camera fades with both men being held back, each one desperately trying to break free.

    End of Show

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    Its been awhile since Ive done one of these, but since you asked I decided to give it a shot and see if I can still do one of these:

    I hate Cena as champion and I hope that Jericho makes him the bitch that he is, I knw that you put that title on him just to spite me. You captured Jericho perfectly (as you always do) Good little segment, I hate face Cena but I love heel Jericho so if Jericho goes over, there will be some redemption.

    Don't care for Striker at all, although Kendrick is pretty damn funny, you should have called him Spanky though. You need to proof-read your work a little better though, no spelling mistakes but a couple noticable grammar mistakes, and you always correct mine.

    Using Maria is always a plus from me, it almost redeems from the train wreck that is face Cena as champ. Good little segment and a nice decision to put Carlito with Benoit, Carlito always makes a good promo.

    We've had this argument about Jeter for awhile, I hope that you make something good out of him, good little match with Benoit/Carlito. Good work with Edge/Michaels you did a good job of capturing Edge's Rated R personna while at the same time, the undertone manipulation that is Michaels.

    Really good work nailing down Carlito as a heel and Lethal as a babyface, boo to jobbing out Finlay. Christian insulting Maria was good, you definately have Christian down as a heel, talking trash to Jay Lethal is always good. Cage goes over, great move. Great promo between Sting and Jericho.

    Main Event time. obviously your lack of long matches kind of kill the epic feel of the match, Jericho wins and gets his shot against Cena. Jericho in the Main Event, damn good television.

    overall, a pretty solid show, there was no obvious weakness to the show, however you are capible of better. Your show lacked the "big draw in moment" a first show should have.

    78/100

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    Opening Promo: You tried to sort of shy away from the basic textbook version, while still using the basic guidelines, so I kind of liked it. Only thing, it really doesn't bring anything new to the table. It's the same feud that the E gave us, with the same characters, with the same reasoning. Did its job though, which is good. Also, as Edge would point out later, it really takes away from title with the fact that a guy that wasn't in the tourney gets to face the two guys that got to finals.

    Striker/Kendrick: It was all just meh.... to me.

    Benoit/Carlito: This was a great promo, where we saw the side of Benoit that makes for not only good wrestling, but a good Fan Fic character. And Carlito was just his usual ownage.

    I'm just indifferent on Jeter right now. I'll just what you do with him before I start to praise.

    Benoit goes over, obviously.

    Edge/Michaels: Bright spot of the show. So much character development in one promo. The Rated R Superstar comes out full force in this segment, and HBK is shown as a master manipulator, and that he'll be able to run the company. Just don't show him that much if he's not going to be a active wrestler.

    Carlito & Lethal: Didn't really care for this. Not becuase it was a bad segment, because it was good, but because it takes away for Cage's win, and he needs to be a big time player in this show.

    Finlay/Regal: Don't really care, they're pretty much the same character, so it didn't matter who went over.

    Christian Promo: Cage > Ownage. The shoving of Maria was uncalled for though.

    Cage/Lethal: Yeah, Cage better go over. Aftermath was good too.

    Jericho & Sting: First of all, Maria totally no-sold the Cage shove. Never good.

    Just good character development here though.

    Main Event: The short summary really kills the moment. Aftermath is just more basic CD.

    All in all a good show, but would have been way better if this was already a two month old fed. At this point, there's no real creativity being brought out, so that needs some serious work. Christian & Edge will keep me watching though.

    80/100

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    Sorry for taking so long to finally get to this, but I'm watching TNA and it's getting me a little excited for writing, but instead of writing for myself, I'm writing your review out and I hope your show doesn't knock my wrestling mood out, but you're KID JERICHO so I doubt it, but hey, you said you were a little rusty. Let's see what we got here. Show no fear, The Kid is here!

    We see your announcers and I guess I can say, "Okay" to that. Nothing else to really say. Shawn Michaels, the owner is coming out and I think you said something about not using your owner too much, but let's see what he has to say. Shawn Michaels does a great job being cocky and being very professional. I loved it, I might have had a tear come down my eye for this right here. But, he then calls out the champ and Cena comes out. Let's see what we got here. Awesome. I loved that first paragraph from Cena. I love how he finished it off by saying "THE CHAMP IS HERE!" Awesome way of getting a lot of cheers and it's a great idea to me to start this new brand with a face champion. Shawn's site that he said was a site that wasn't wrestling. Wow, Jericho comes out and this promo was just pure amazing. You nailed John Cena. You nailed Chris Jericho. You nailed professional Shawn Michaels. Just an amazing promo, my man. I loved it. Very good job. I loved every second of it. If I saw it, I would've definitely laughed at some parts. Jericho owned the crowd, Cena owned Jericho, Michaels gave Jericho a shot that nobody gave him. This is going to be awesome. Will Jericho lose tonight and moan about it? Oh man, I'm excited to see what goes on, but the safe bet would be Jericho winning so I'll take him.

    The Striker/Kendrick confrontation was okay. Kendrick had something to say to make fun of Striker and it was cute. Nothing special, but it was good enough. The match begins and let's get it on. Kendrick wins and this isnt going to go well with Mr. Striker. Should be interesting to see where this is going to lead. I can't say I'm too excited about this feud, but it'll probably get a little more interesting.

    Maria interviews Benoit and Benoit actually sounded great in that promo. He talked about his favors and that's definitely a good thing. Carlito just sounded bleh. I don't know, I guess it's hard to actually write Carlito too good because he's a gimmick "cool" talker, but eh. We'll see. My bet is on Benoit winning unless Carlito has a new surprising submission move. That would be... dare I say, Cool.

    Chris Benoit faces Carlito and Benoit does what he says he was going to do. Carlito runs out of rope breaks and when he's trapped in the crossface, again with no rope breaks, he has no choice but to tap. Typical. Good, though.

    Edge is pissed off at Michaels and he bitches and curses and calls the kids "little bastards". Woo. I enjoy that real anger. Go Edge, but he'll probably lose and bitch and then maybe feud with Sting cause he'll have to take his anger out on someone.

    Carlito snaps on Jay Lethal! That's fucking cool! That's really all I can say about that right there. Go Carlito. Cool face.

    William Regal wins and it was by TKO. He continues the beaten on Finlay and if these two have a nice feud that would be ownage, yo. Finlay loves to fight, but finally a heel coming out on top. I thought this was going to be a face-night until the main event.

    Lethal shows heart and he wants to fight. Go Lethal! Maybe Carlito comes out and beats the crap out of him some more... hopefully. Lethal/Carlito would be a decent feud, but could be interesting. Lethal showing a lot of heart and Carlito being cool, it would be nice.

    Christian was meh. I didn't even like the way he owned Maria. He just didn't catch my attention. Nothing else to really say.

    Christian easily beats Lethal, because well, Lethal was already beaten up thanks to Carlito. Lethal wanted to fight in this match because he didn't want to lose the oppurtunity, but I'm sure he's going to be pissed off at Carlito for fucking up his new LSW career that just started. Should be interesting. Besides the patting to Lethal's stomach, nothing else really has me excited about him. Sorry to say that, but I'm not feeling Captain Charisma.

    Poor Maria. She's always getting owned. Jericho talks and it wasn't as good as the first promo, but it was decent enough. Sting comes in and good, now we can actually "think" he has a chance to win. I think the chances are Jericho-Edge-Sting. Sting with the least, because, well, Cena's a face so yeah. Let's get to the main event already~! Woo~!

    Jericho/Edge/Sting is up next and it goes the way I expected. Sting having the least chance to win. Jericho winning due to Edge finishing Sting off. Damn, Edge is going to be PISSED off. Woo. I'm excited to see what Edge has in store for us. Should be really interesting. The after match goes on with Cena & Jericho brawling it out. How cute.

    Anyways, the show is done and it was pretty good show. I wish you'd have some after match promos with the Kendrick/Striker so I can see if anything is going to be built around it. Same with Finlay/Regal. I'm extremely into Jericho/Cena, I'm interested in what Edge is doing. HBK was awesome. Carlito/Lethal sounds like it's going to get REALLY interesting. But everything else was meh. The only thing I hate is Christian. I just couldn't get into it. Carlito on the mic was not good, but I like him going wild on Lethal. It makes me interesting. Anyways, as for your grade, two points for coming back... 82/100

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    (P)roduct (I)nspection: Hostile (Cahoots) Review...

    Alright... here we go!

    Everything leading up to the first show has been phenomenal. It's all worked out differently but arguably better than I could've imagined. I'm glad to have been a part of the initial brainstorming sessions.

    Let's get it on with your first show...

    Tenay and Heyman will work fine as a commentating duo. I'm not a big fan of commentary unless it truly adds a unique and needed something to a fed. I don't feel like I can write such commentary so I cut it out of my fed completely. You PM'd me this opening segment. Everything I said about it then still holds true. Nice opening. Fits the low-key feel of your fed but still makes everything feel important and establishes key elements, etc. You have a tremendous talent for getting voices spot-on. Tonight's main event looks tight, and I'm going to guess Chris Jericho walks out on top but not without some sort of Cena-altercation.

    Nice soundtrack. I have a feeling your soundtrack might rival mine and could, indeed, surpass mine. I expect big things for Kendrick in this fed seeing as he's a hometown hero and part of Michaels' enduring legacy. I'd rather have a definition of cessation. Haha. Striker, although in voice (as I love being able to expect from you), comes across as bland at the moment. Kendrick punks Striker out verbally and wins the match to advance in the Fusion Tournament. Hopefully Kendrick'll go far if not win the whole damn thing.

    I stopped watching the WWE long before I was ever introduced to Maria, but I take it she's half ditz half tart but can be fun to write sometimes. Benoit's little rant, although ending strongly in favor of the Crossface, makes the Crossface seem weak. Benoit keeps willingly admitting that the Crossface can be broken out of and escaped. I don't know. I feel like with a new fed comes a new opportunity to make the submission as bad ass legitimate and intimidating as it originall was. I hate weak/overly escapable submissions. However, I don't know what kind of submissions would work more in the favor of the Iron Division as far as psychology goes. I guess I'll wait and see on that. Also, your Carlito's promo from your last fed was stronger. This one was a tad bit bland. But, whatever.

    I like that you're introducing Johnny Jeter (even though he wasn't on our roster ), and his little promo feels like some of CM Punk's original ECW vignettes. I'm guessing he's going to the Fusion Division or the Iron Division. Duh.

    I think Iron Division Matches are going to quickly become my favorite kind. Benoit wins, which I'm glad to see. I hope he goes far in the division and strongly re-establishes himself as a legitimate threat to anyone in any setting, etc. etc.

    Haha. I like how you write Michaels, especially in his dealings with Edge. Edge is a whiny-bitch heel, nice. I'm beginning to wonder who'll be the first heel to draw Michaels into an in-ring feud and out of his management role. I'm guessing/hoping either Edge or Jericho, but I'll have to wait and see. It might be WAY to early to get my hopes up about any of that.

    Carlito snaps on Lethal for almost no reason. Other than the fact that I think you might have plans for Lethal and that I'm not to hot on him, there's not a lot to make me truly buy this beatdown. Hopefully, however, you'll push/turn Carlito into one helluva bad ass heel in the Iron Division.

    Finlay vs. Regal, probably the best match on your card so far. Neither man seems overly face. Just rough, tough heel vs. rough, tough heel. I like the chemistry than can exist in such a dynamic. I don't know if I like or dislike Finlay being knocked out, but this match was hardcore hot. However, I don't really see either Regal or Finlay becoming main and important facets of your roster, etc. They'll probably be underplayed. Which is actually okay, especially considering other things you've got going on. The post-match beatdown at least promises a couple more Regal/Finlay matches.

    You're making Lethal seem Austin-level tough... which means bigger push than I want him to have. However, Austin is an interesting Texas name we never mentioned in the brainstorming session. Maybe you could introduce him down the road to drag Michaels out of his businessman role. It's what Austin does best, they both have strong history with each other, and they're both huge Texas Stars. Just an idea. Christian might be my favorite character in your fed this time around. I hope it comes down to him and Kendrick in the Fusion Finals. Christian could then slaughter Kendrick in the finals as sort of a "message" to Shawn. Just another idea. We need to get online and brainstorm more. My fed needs help. Haha!

    Nice commercial.

    I can't tell if this was a match summary of if the match was actually just that short because of how injured Lethal was. In either case, I hope Lethal is downplayed from here on out. I'd rather have Lethal feud with Carlito than have Christian's AMAZING character be tied down my Lethal's attempts to get over in my eyes.

    Is Sting a born again Christian? I feel like he and Shawn are really sensitive about language. It definitely fits Shawn's character... but Sting? Still works for me. Did Sting try hitting Jericho with the bat? That seems really heelish. Just for the record... I hope Jericho destroys Sting tonight.

    Despite not liking general commentary, I've always loved special guest commentary. You've nailed all the voices here, IMO. I like the main event match. This is the best match on your card, topping Regal/Finlay. I liked the ending of Edge doing the work only to have Jericho essentially steal the win. It'll work well with Edge's whining character, and it gives me the Jericho/Cena confrontation I want to see. I love the uncontrollable brawl to end the show. I feel like it reminds me of the good ol' days when I still watched the WWE (and actually even further back when it was the good ol' days of the WWF).

    Overall, decent show. Nothing too special, but nothing too bland. I really love your Iron and Fusion Titles, as you probably know very well. Names and faces I'm keeping my eyes on in your fed are Kendrick, Jericho, and especially Christian Cage. You write nearly everyone's voice perfectly, IMO -- mega-bonus points for that. It helps make up for some of the blandish promos. I like Shawn in charge but am waiting for him to get implicated in in-ring action somehow with one of his superstars OR Stone Cold Steve Austin.

    I'll be reading, definitely... and definitely continuing to chat online with you about this and my fed.

    Nice work so far, KJ.

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    KJ, you're a fan fic oldie from the "Golden Age" of Fan Fic. While I like LSW, I wasn't crazy about the backstory, anyways, here I go.

    Great intro with Paul E. and Mike Tenay. OK, HBK comes out. While I see your justification in using the theme song for recognizability reasons. you're pushing this as the Anti-Vince fed, yet Shawn is using his WWE theme song, just pointing it out. It's fine.

    Great intro promo from Shawn. The best way to get a face authority over is a promise not to get too involved. Good job. You are using these guys great, it's their characters to a T. Cena wants Jericho. This should be good. Jericho comes out and won't talk until Cena challenges him too. Jericho is great so far. Cena is really challenging Jericho to man up. Jericho has an answer for everything, I love that. That's a pretty promising threat. Shawn is giving Jericho the chance. Twenty nine guys who busted their asses to win the tournament get thrown to the way side for an outsider who swung a chair...I guess that's the wrestling business for you.

    Fusion Tourney Time and Kendrick has already impressed me on the mic. Kendrick gets the W (very little surprise.) I love Heyman after that. His diction is impressive to the extreme.

    Great Benoit promo. I'm very impressed. Carlito on the other hand...I don't know. I couldn't really see him saying that. I'm not sure this intense heel thing will work for him. Prove me wrong though I guess.

    'The Thrillseeker' Johnny Jeeter is coming to LSW. I've never heard of him before (Yes, I'm playing along), but he seems like he could be good.

    Benoit beat Carlito. I can honestly say I'm not surprised. This further dampers my opinion of the intense Carlito. Again, not really impressed with your use of him.

    Edge is pissed, and rightfully so. I love Edge when he's going for the gold. When he has it, and since he's had it he just hasn't seemed the same. Michaels seems to be completely blowing Edge off, and trying to be funny. Michaels makes it seem like he doesn't have time for Edge, which kinda IMO devalues Edge's credibility and status. Also Jericho said earlier he's been plotting revenge on Cena for a year and a half...Why would he have let himself go? Again, doesn't make sense to me, but whatever.

    Carlito snaps on poor old Jay Lethal...That's not cool. I'm still not sure about this man. Being intense and being cool are pretty opposite if you ask me. I still have faith in you. I'm really hoping you turn my view on this around.

    William Regal TKOs Finlay. I'm not sure I would ever TKO a guy. Especially on a TV show. Just makes him look like a punk. I mean on one hand it makes Regal look badass, but what does it do for Finlay? I'm not sure about this Iron Division man.

    Go Lethal. Hopefully it doesn't backfire

    Intense Christian, it works. Instead of bitching and complaining he's going to prove HBK wrong. I hope it all works out for him.

    Was it you, or Jay Lethal, that always used to put commercials in your shows? I think it was Lethal, but it does add a taste of realism to them.

    Christian did exactly what he said he was going to do. He took out a not anywhere near 100% Lethal, and advanced, but my question is will Christian gets arrogant with this cake match victory, or will it come back and bite him in the ass?

    AAH You're doing a Sting/Jericho programish...Me too! Sting seems understanding as to why Jericho needs this match. also I'd like to note that Jericho ISN'T prepared for this match like I would've thought he should've been. We'll see what happens...

    Cena joins the announce team for the Main Event I think it's painfully obvious Jericho will win. Not surprised...Jericho stole the win nonetheless. More material for Edge to work with. Jericho and Cena brawl, no surprise.

    Final thoughts: I had high expectations for this fed. They were fufilled for the most part, but some sore thumbs stuck out. I'm not crazy about the way you're using Carlito. I didn't like the TKO, and some things are just painfully obvious. Sorry but there was no doubt in my mind that Carlito, Lethal, Edge, or Sting had any chance in the world of winning. Good show, but honeslty not a great show. 79/100.
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    Okay, I'm back in Fan Fic for a review, and I think I picked the right fed to check out here. Now, I went back and checked over those house show reports you put together, and damn, my only complaint is that would have been a great tournament to have seen written out completely. But oh well, I like the concept you have going for this fed, and the first show looks good. And before I begin, I'll just say now that I'm not a big fan of the super summarized matches. Way too short for me. But that's all I'll say about them.

    Now, first of all, I really like the Tenay/Heyman combo you have going on commentary. I don't believe that combo has ever been used before, so it feels fresh. But let's hope that the McMahon bashing is over now. Too much of it, and it gets pretty annoying, no matter how justified it is.

    Okay, I really enjoyed the opening segment here. Michaels is going to make for an interesting "GM" character, but I have a hard time believing he won't get a lot of airtime. Anyway, you seem to have a lot of motivation writing about Cena, as his promo is perfect in terms of capturing his character. It seems you made the right choice in making him the champion. As for Jericho, his promo is good as well, which is no surprise. Plus, I like the direction you're taking this Jericho-Cena feud, as this new "man possessed" direction you have for Jericho is very intriguing. Only problem is, it's pretty much a forgone conclusion who's going to win that #1 Contender's match.

    Man, I love that you have Matt Striker in your fed. I've recently begun to mark for him, as he plays the heel role perfectly. As long as you give him plenty of mic time and allow him to be important, I'll be a happy man. And looking at your current username, I don't think I have to worry about what you're going to do with Brian Kendrick. Anyway, Kendrick gets the nice victory with a rollup, keeping Striker credible at the same time. And also, I don't believe I've commented on them yet, but I really like the idea you had for the two seperate divisions in your fed. Both divisions are incredibly unique, which is going to create some great stuff.

    Hm, as for this Benoit-Carlito interaction backstage, it was good and bad. I loved Benoit's intense promo, as it really captured Benoit perfectly. Plus, the last line with the "trail of blood and seperated shoulders" was pure gold. Only problem was Carlito's part, because when I envisioned Carlito saying that promo, is really sounded forced in my head. Now, that's not really your fault, as I'm really not used to Carlito being anything other than comedic on the mic.

    Johnny Jeter is coming. I've never seen anything with him as the "Thrillseeker" in OVW, so this should be interesting.

    Hm, the Benoit-Carlito match went a little differently than I envisioned. I thought Carlito would put up more of a fight against Benoit, but then again it's good he didn't, because Benoit is on a totally different level. Plus, I hate the way the WWE makes Benoit seem so weak all the time. He should be getting in the ring, "seperating shoulders", and walking out of there unscathed.

    The Edge-Michaels interaction was good. It made sure to establish Edge's heel character as the whining, annoying heel, which I think he plays extremely well. I like it a lot more than the "Rated-R" character he plays now.

    Still not buying into "badass" Carlito. It's just not working out too well for me, unfortunately. And I guess this might lead into a Carlito-Lethal feud?

    Hm, now for the Regal-Finlay match. I have a lot of mixed feelings on this one. First of all, the rough, hard hitting nature of the Iron division is extremely enticing and I love what you're trying to do with the whole division. But, I'm not sure about the whole TKO finish. It sounds good on paper, but the execution really hurts the guy getting TKO'ed. I mean, it makes Regal seem even more of a badass, while killing Finlay's own badass persona at the same time. Hopefully Finlay gets his own TKO payback on Regal in the future, or he's going to seem pretty weak.

    I like the direction you're going with Christian, where he feels he's being held down in the Fusion Division, and he's going to try and dominate in order to prove himself. Plus, I like how you didn't have him just dominate Lethal clean and pick up the victory. It makes him seem dominant, but at the same time, he didn't just destroy a completely healthy opponent. It keeps that heel dynamic involved that Christian isn't really above the Fusion division at all.

    Okay, backstage altercation with Jericho and Sting. Now, I love Jericho as you know, and I loved his little promo. The whole angle you have going where he is on a mission to destroy Cena is going to incredibly fun to read, as I've said. I'm not really big on Sting at all, and he's really boring me in TNA, so I have no desire to read about him in Fan Fic. However, if you're set on using him, I would prefer him just not saying anything and coming down from the rafters and kicking ass. But that's just me.

    The main event was what it was, and it was a little hard to get into it as it was painfully obvious Jericho wasn't losing. However, I'm glad he didn't pin Edge and pinned Sting, as Edge should be kept strong at the moment. And pull apart brawl! It's overdone, but damn, still a mark out moment. Nice ending.

    So yeah, overall, it was a good show. A few things I wasn't too big on, but I enjoyed most of it. I'm not going to place a grade on it, as I'm tired of grades. Just let the review speak for itself.


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    Jericho Can See You Champ

    The road to Open Range is on. Monday night, Chris Jericho signed a contract in exchange for a number one contenders match for John Cenaís LSW Heavyweight Championship. After a grueling match with Sting and Edge, Jericho came out victorious, stealing the victory away from the Rated R Superstar. With Cena down at ringside, it wasnít long until tempers flared and every security guard in the building was needed to keep the two men separate. Will the LSW be able to keep these two men apart or was Monday just a taste of whatís to come?

    In other news, both the Fusion and Iron Division tournaments are officially underway, with Chris Benoit and William Regal advancing in the Iron Division and Christian Cage and Bryan Kendrick advancing in the Fusion Division. With two more tournament matches left for each division, only time will tell who will truly reign supreme.

    Speaking of reigning supreme, Carlito didnít handle his losing effort against Chris Benoit very well. An irate Carlito attacked Jay Lethal moments before his Fusion Division match with Christian Cage for seemingly no reason. LSW.com cannot report the extent of Lethalís injuries, but anyone who watched Showdown could see the effects as Lethal was defeated easily by Christian Cage.

    With only three weeks left until the LSWís debut PPV, Open Range, tension is rising for all the LSW superstars.

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    Edge Breaks Down

    After Showdown, LSW.com tried conduction an interview with “The Rated R Superstar” Edge but were met with hostility:

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    You want a damn interview, I’ll give you an interview. Cena, Jericho, I’m going to deal with you soon. But Sting…this is the second night in a row you’ve ROBBED ME OF MY TITLE! So I’m making it my personal mission to completely and utterly destroy your career, your life and everything you hold precious. Now get that damn thing out of my face.
    Stay tuned to LSW.com for more.

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    Words from HBK: The Owner Speaks


    So much to say, so little time. Thanks to everyone who tuned in for week one of Showdown, first off. I’d be lying if I said it wasn’t a relief to see the show go off relatively smoothly, though there’s a few issues I’d like to address.

    Carlito Colon, the “epitome” of cool, as he so often tells us. I’ve got to say I was shocked to see his attack on Jay Lethal, and the medical staff has informed me that Jay Lethal will be out of action for the next three weeks, but he will be ready for Open Range.

    Secondly, I want to talk about Edge. I read Edge’s comments about Sting “costing” him the LSW Heavyweight Championship and I couldn’t help but laugh. Edge says Sting cost him two nights in a row. Anyone can tell you Edge cost Edge. He just happened to not be the better man. It happens in this sport quite a bit. And ol’ HBK will never call himself a genius, but knowing both Edge and Sting, I can see a combustible situation from a mile away.

    The Fusion and Iron Divisions are getting moving now, and I couldn’t be happier with the matches they are producing. That’s what Lonestar Wrestling is all about: wrestling. I personally can’t wait to see the finals at Open Range. I’ll even be announcing one later in this column.

    Speaking of Open Range, expect more matches to be announced soon, joining the Fusion and Iron Division finals matches and the main event; John Cena defending his LSW Heavyweight Championship against new LSW-signee, Chris Jericho.

    Now, as I said last week, I’d have more information on the Tag Team situation. LSW is in fact going to have a Tag Team Division and we’re going to be crowning those Champions at Open Range. But as for now, that’s all you get. Read back next week and I’ll have the final details for the LSW Tag Team Division.

    Keep checking by LSW.com for the latest stories, rumors and about everything else.

    Until then, I remain…

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    Cage‘s Promise


    LSW.com recently received this message from Captain Charisma, Christian Cage:

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    I hope everyone in the Fusion Division saw what I did to Jay Lethal tonight, because everyone is going to suffer that fate. And you know what, you can thank Shawn Michaels for that. He puts me in the midget division, I’m going to break each and every one of you guys to show him how wrong he was. ‘Cause that’s how I roll.
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    Showdown Preview

    This Monday, the Fusion and Iron Division tournaments continue! JBL, Bryan Danielson, AJ Styles and more will be competing for a chance to stand tall on their respective divisions.

    Also, after Edge’s comments here on LSW.com, the man called Sting has sent word he’s going to be calling Edge out on Monday. What will happen when the Rated R Superstar and The Franchise meet in the ring?

    One week after earning the number one contendership, “The Living Legend” Chris Jericho will be looking to continue his desire for revenge against LSW Champion John Cena.

    Confirmed Matches

    Gregory Helms vs. Bryan Danielson (Iron Division Tournament)
    JBL vs. CM Punk (Iron Division Tournament)
    Paul London vs. AJ Styles (Fusion Division Tournament)
    Christopher Daniels vs. Jay Lethal (Fusion Division Tournament
    Plus More!

    Tune in tonight at 9et/8c for Showdown.

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    February 19, 2007
    The Alamo, San Antonio, TX

    Pre-show:

    The second Showdown was just as filled as the last one. I couldn’t find an empty seat and the crowd seemed pumped for what was to come. The crowd was definitely hot for the entire show, which included Showdown and about 30-40 minutes or so of dark matches.

    Showdown Results:

    Showdown opened with Edge already standing in the ring. He cut a heel promo before the Showdown video started getting the crowd rabid when the camera went to him live. He cut one helluva promo on Sting about being screwed for the second night in a row out of the chance to be LSW Champion by Sting. It didn’t take long until Sting came out and said they each lost, but he’s tired of Edge blaming him. Sting said Edge needs to be a man and take some responsibility, but if he wants a fight, Sting’s right here for a fight. Edge looks furious and Sting is daring him. Edge almost goes to attack but stop and rethinks it all. He rolls out of the ring and walks to the back to a HUGE chorus of cheers as Sting stares at him the entire way.

    Backstage, Edge goes to Shawn Michaels office and says he wants that freak Sting in the ring tonight. Shawn says no. Shawn says Edge will face Sting, but not tonight. Instead, they’ll face each other at Open Range because this little thing between the two of them needs to end. Edge says that’s not good enough and Shawn says he’s all about compromise, so how about tonight, it’s Edge and Chris Jericho vs. Sting and John Cena. The crowd goes ballistic and Edge seems slightly content.

    Backstage, CM Punk is standing throwing little jabs in the air, warming up when he stops and smirks to himself. JBL walks up to him and talks down to Punk and says he’s going to break his neck tonight in their Iron Division match. Punk says JBL had a 10 month stretch in a 10 year career that didn’t absolutely suck, and that’s impressive. But Punk’s had a 7 year career that’s featured seven years of glory and tonight will be no different. Punk walks away confidently and JBL seems pissed.

    1. AJ Styles d. Christopher Daniels. This was a First Round Fusion Divison Championship Match. A damn good match reminiscent of their TNA matches. Styles surprises Daniels with a quick roll-up for the 1-2-3. Daniels seems pissed and rejects AJ’s handshake after the match. Daniels walks off angrily and AJ tries to shrug it off.

    Winner: AJ Styles in 12:35.

    Backstage, Christian Cage watches the monitor smirking as Styles watches Daniels walk away.

    A pre-taped video between Mike Tenay and Carlito is aired about Carlito’s attack on Jay Lethal last week. Carlito played it off arrogantly, acting like it was no big deal and that Jay Lethal was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. Carlito’s temper came out after Tenay said the rumors are Jay Lethal is looking for revenge. Carlito got in Tenay’s face and shoved him off his stool, telling Tenay “that’s not cool.” Carlito ripped his microphone off and walked away as Tenay looked at the camera shocked.

    Backstage, Chris Benoit is grabbing a cup of water when William Regal walks into the picture talking down to him. Regal says that while they both won their matches last week, it took everything Benoit had while Regal didn’t even break a sweat. Regal says he feels a good warm-up would be good and challenges Benoit to a little “in-ring sparring” tonight. Benoit agrees and we have a match.

    2. JBL d. CM Punk. The match was actually better then expected, with Punk playing the great baby face and JBL heeling it up as always. Punk was preparing for the Anaconda Vice with a Urange, but JBL powered out of it with elbows and when Punk turns around he was met with a BRUTAL Clothesline from Hell for the pin.

    Winner: JBL in 8:12 minutes.

    After the match, Punk was helped up and received a HUGE CM Punk chant on his way to the back.

    Backstage, Paul London and Brian Kendrick cut a promo as London finished getting dressed for his match. Kendrick said he won last week and this time it’s London’s turn. London says this is where it all began, in a fed ran by Shawn Michaels. So if it ends up being London vs. Kendrick for the Fusion Division Championship, so be it. Kendrick agrees and offers his hand. Paul accepts it and leaves and Kendrick smirks to himself nodding his head.

    A “Thrillseeker” Johnny Jeter promo airs. This time he was getting ready to jump out of a plane proclaiming he’ll do anything to get an adrenaline rush and that in 3 weeks, he’ll make his LSW debut at Open Range.

    3. Paul London d. Shannon Moore. This was a pretty good match. Not as good as the Styles/Daniels match, but fairly good. Moore played the heel fairly well (and I was thrilled to see he ditched the whole “reject” gimmick) and Paul had the entire crowd behind him. Some real daredevil moves from each, especially from the ring to the floor. London ended up winning with the London Calling.

    Winner: Paul London in 10:05 minutes.

    Backstage, Gregory Helms is being interviewed by Maria. He says he was the longest reigning WWE Champion in years, holding the Cruiserweight Championship for over year and he‘s going to hold the Iron Division Championship even longer. He became a household name and was the reason people still bothered with the crap known as the WWE. But Bryan Danielson? He looks at Maria and asks “honestly, who the hell is Bryan Danielson?” Maria kind of shrugs when suddenly, Danielson steps into view smiling. Helms asked who let the stage worker take his shirt off? Danielson laughs and says that Helms was a year long Cruiser champ. He mockingly applauds him but stops. That must have been great. A whole year. What is that, he says, about 4 appearances on TV? The crowd laughs and Helms looks pissed. Danielson says he could talk about all his title reigns across the world, but unlike Helms, he lets his actions in the ring speak instead of begging the crowd to think he’s great. Danielson smiles and walks away and Helms looks pissed.

    The crowd erupts as video of John Cena show arriving plays. He walks through the hallways when out of nowhere Jericho blindsides him! The crowd goes nuts as the two begin brawling backstage, slamming through doors and over tables. Agents (I spotted Dean Malenko!) and referees finally break the two apart. As they’re trying to get at each other, Shawn Michaels runs into the picture screaming at them. He says that he’s not going to let these two rip each other apart before Open Range, so from here on out, if they lay a hand on one another in a non-sanctioned manner, Jericho loses his title shot and Cena will be stripped of the title. Each man calms down and looks at Shawn shocked. Shawn says one man runs this show and it’s him. He walks away as security slowly lets them go. Jericho and Cena stare at each other before Jericho walks away.

    3. William Regal and Chris Benoit went to a draw. One helluva match between these two mat geniuses, but before it could really get going, someone rushed through the crowd and attacked Chris Benoit. It took a second but once he looked out I was shocked to see it was Brent Albright (formerly known as Gunner Scott *shudder* in the WWE). Brent attacked Benoit’s arm, eventually locking on the Crowbar until the refs could pull him off. Regal just smiled during the whole thing.

    Winner: No Contest at 7:54 minutes.

    After the attack, Albright left back through the crowd. Benoit refused help and walked out under his own power to huge applause and a loud Benoit chant.

    Backstage, Shannon Moore was shown to be in a dark corner curled up on a box mumbling, shaking really hard. Almost sounded as if he was crying. “Wow” was all I could see. Definitely a creepy moment.

    4. Bryan Danielson d. Gregory Helms. This was a much better match then I expected. Fun to see Helms get to show what he’s really got against someone with a load of talent and little limitations. Some great ground wrestling. Helms looked like he was going to nail the Vertebreaker, but before he could hoist Danielson up, Danielson tripped Helms to the ground, stomach first. Danielson quickly got on top of Helms and started the rolling elbows and didn’t stop until the ref pulled him off, calling the match!

    Winner: Bryan Danielson in 13:20.

    After the match, Danielson celebrated with the crowd. In the ring, Helms came to slowly, bleeding from his nose and his mouth. The ref helped Helms to his feet, only for Helms to drop him with a right hand. Helms lifted the ref up and nailed a Vertebreaker to huge boos. Helms walked to the back, wiping the blood on his hand, pissed off to all hell.

    Backstage, Jericho and Edge were in the locker room cutting a promo about their match. Each wanted the man they were feuding with and pretty much told the other to stay out of his way. Edge ended by saying he hopes Jericho wins at Open Range, because after being Cena so much last year, he wants a new conquest when winning the title. Jericho says Edge’ll have to actually get a win over the 40 year old man before he even thinks of titles. Edge smirks and the camera fades with both men staring at each other.

    5. John Cena and Sting d. Chris Jericho and Edge. Basic tag match with the heels cheating every chance they could while Cena plays the baby face in peril. He finally hit’s the hot tag to Sting who comes in HUGE, but actually gets double teamed by Jericho and Edge slowing his momentum. Sting manages to tag Cena again, but Jericho and Edge get the double team again. Jericho grabs Cena and holds him for Edge. Edge goes for a spear, but Cena moves and Edge nails Jericho! Cena throws Edge out of the ring, grabs Jericho and nails the F-U for the pin!

    Winners: John Cena and Sting in 17:25.

    After the match, Jericho goes to sneak attack Cena and Sting with a chair, but they catch him before he can and Jericho drops the chair and retreats quickly. Cena and Sting stand tall and this appears to be where the show ends.

    BONUS Dark Match:

    Sting d. Edge. Edge grabs a mic and says he’d kick Sting’s ass, but he knows Cena and Sting will just screw him over. Cena grabs a mic and says if it’s a fight Edge wants with the Man Called Sting, it’s a fight he’s gonna get. Good night San Antonio. Cena raises his belt and leaves, leaving just Sting in the ring. Sting “Whoo’s” loudly and Edge runs into the ring. A short match, but lots of fun with Edge almost nailing a spear, but Sting avoiding it and nails the Scorpion Deathdrop for the pin.

    An Awesome show with a great atmosphere.

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    The Roads to Greatness Continue

    Tonight on Showdown, both the Iron Division and Fusion Division Tournaments heated up, with four more men advancing.

    In the Iron Division, cagey veteran John Bradshaw Layfield was able to pass up the man who’s only addiction is competition, CM Punk. A huge Clothesline from Hell sealed the deal, propelling JBL back to championship glory.

    After an intense encounter earler (click for video):

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    Bryan Danielson was able to shut up the loud and boisterous Gregory Helms with a brutal series of elbows, resulting in a ref stoppage under the Iron Division rules.

    In the Fusion Division, AJ Styles bested his former partner Christopher Daniels with a surprise roll-up. Showing amazing sportsmanship, Styles offered a handshake to his friend, but Daniels refused to shake it, walking away instead. In the back, a very pleased Christian Cage watched the monitor.

    Paul London joined his friend and partner Bryan Kendrick in the second round of the Fusion Division Tournament with a decisive victory over Shannon Moore. Oddly enough, Moore was spotted later in the evening suffering what appeared to be an emotional breakdown.

    The feuds between both Sting and Edge and LSW Heavyweight Champion and Chris Jericho heated up even more, with a phenomenal tag team main event.

    Earlier in the night, Edge and Sting had an intense encounter in the middle of the ring, ending with Edge backing away from the Stinger. (click for video)

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    After the argument, Edge demanded a match with Sting, but instead, Shawn Michaels booked a tag team match, also featuring Chris Jericho and John Cena. After a miscommunication between Edge and Jericho, Cena picked up the win for his team, nailing Edge with the F-U. (click for video)

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    Can anything stop Edge and Sting as they head into their respective matches at Open Range?

    Monday also featured the shocking return of Brent Albright, formerly known as Gunner Scott. Albright returned costing his former idol, Chris Benoit, his match, locking on the shoulder-destroying Crowbar to Benoit until security was able to tear him off.

    Finally, another video aired hyping the daredevil known as “Thrillseeker” Johnny Jeter, and this time, it let us know he’s coming at Open Range. Will the world be ready? (click for video)

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    There’s only two weeks until Open Range and with intensity at an all-time high, the LSW locker room is pumped and ready to go.

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    The Styles/Cage Connection


    LSW.com recently received this message from Captain Charisma, Christian Cage:

    Quote Originally Posted by Christian Cage
    So we‘ve got Bryan Kendrick, Paul London and AJ Styles left, along with Captain Charisma, Christian Cage. Is this even a competition? I think Shawn Michaels should just save these kids the embarrassment and give me the title now, because otherwise, it’s just a waste of my time.
    After all these comments, AJ Styles, one of the pioneers of the old TNA’s X-Division, couldn’t remain quiet anymore.

    I’m getting sick and tired of Christian Cage running his mouth. Whether it’s me, London or Kendrick, one of us is going to shut him up and Open Range, but I’m not waiting that long. Next week, I’m walking out to the ring and I’m calling that loudmouth to meet me there if he has the guts.
    Stay tuned to LSW for more developments.

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    Brent Albright Makes his Statement


    Brent Albright shocked the world when he attacked the man he long admitted to admiring, Chris Benoit. Albright tried to tear the Crippler’s arm off with his deadly Crowbar submission, not letting ago until forced to, only to escape back through the crowd. LSW.com is anxiously searching for answers as to whether Albright is in fact a signed wrestler for Lonestar Wrestling and will continue to follow this story as more information becomes available.

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    Personally, I don't know how to appropriately go about writing a review for your fed... but I want to get something down so you'll feel somewhat obliged to browse through mine in return.

    Anywho... the first and main thing I need to comment on is your formatting. It is absolutely brilliant. You have honestly revolutionized how to write and format a Fan Fic Fed, and I'm willing to bet it's only a matter of months (pending motivation and commitment to maintaining this fed) before we begin to see this style of fed-formatting pop-up elsewhere. Whoever, I'd like to state for the record that everyone who attempts this style will make their fed feel like a second-rate rip-off...

    No one's as good as the originator, KJ!!~

    (I'm jealous I didn't format my show this way first.)

    Secondly, I love the "territorial" and "Big Indy" feel you've got going on with your fed. The "big names" mixed with not having an actual weekly show is definitely unique. The house show reports with videos and so forth is definitely fun and lends itself very well to the readability of this fed. It also doesn't take anything away from the storylines running through your fed... but then again, you have a brilliant mind for wrestling and so it might not matter what format you choose to go with. Hell, you could probably write a fed in binary code and the storylines would still be clear and awesome.

    My favorite characters in your fed right now are Christian and Edge. I'm really amped about Cena and Jericho, and I love that your feuds take so much from real-life history and backstories, etc. etc. Just from the conversations we've had, I can't wait to see Cena/Jericho pan out in addition to so many other things.

    The unique divisions you have, the Iron and Fusion divisions, only further make this fed stand out in a very, very good way. Even before I began hunting for reviews and reading other people's work, this was one of the only feds I'd read. It's just that easy AND well-put-together. KJ, you continue to put your stamp on Fan Fic by revolutionizing the place with your creativity and ingenuity. Carry on my hostile cahoot, carry on!

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    Words from HBK: The Owner Speaks


    Egos, tempers and the desire for glory are all running high in the LSW, and I definitely have my hands full. The card for Open Range is shaping up nicely, with the addition of Edge versus Sting in a match fans (and myself) will all be looking forward to anxiously. We’re also down to are final four wrestlers for both the Fusion and Iron Division Championships.

    I’m here today to announce yet another match for Open Range, the LSW World Tag Team Championship match. That’s right, I’ve hinted at it for a couple of weeks and now the time has come. Ol’ HBK swore he was about chances, and he’s giving a final opportunity to the wrestlers who participated in the Iron and Fusion Division Tournaments. The four men from each division that suffered first round losses will be paired at random in a Lethal Lottery Tag Team Turmoil match for the vacant LSW World Tag Team Titles.

    Lonestar Wrestling is about competition. On any given night, the array of talent here could come out victorious over anyone else. That’s why I’m giving these men one more shot at glory.

    I would like to take this time to address one man; Brent Albright. Some may remember Albright’s tenure in the WWE under the name “Gunner Scott”, but I would like to take this time to say that Brent Albright is not under contract with LSW. I’ve been in contact with Chris Benoit, and he is obviously not very thrilled about what occurred this past Monday on Showdown. There’s some backstage workings on this situation, and as things flesh out, I’ll keep all of you, the fans, in the loop.

    That’s all I have for today. I’ll be back next week to address the pressing issues in the LSW and be prepared for Showdown, because I can assure you it’s only just begun.

    Until then, I remain…

    HBK Shawn Michaels

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    BREAKING NEW
    LSW Signs New Superstar

    We at LSW.com have recently received word that the LSW has acquired a new star. While no one knows for sure who exactly this wrestler is, speculation is running rampant.

    “It’s a big name,” says LSW owner Shawn Michaels with a grin. “This guy’s got all the tools to be a big star and I think he’s going to do big things in the LSW.”

    When asked for hints on who it is, the Heartbreak Kid’s lips remained sealed.

    “I can’t spoil the surprise, can I? You’ll all find out at Open Range in two weeks.”

    We at LSW.com we’ll keep you up to date as more news develops.

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    Lonestar Wrestling has come to terms on the release of the following talent. LSW wishes them all the best in their future endeavors.

    Sean O’Haire
    Hardcore Holly
    Jamie Noble

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    Showdown Preview

    On the heels of last Monday’s explosive Showdown, the road to Open Range keeps getting hotter. LSW Owner Shawn Michaels has scheduled matches for both LSW Heavyweight Champion John Cena and Number One Contender Chris Jericho. John Cena will be squaring off against his former nemesis, Caribbean Cool himself, Carlito. Chris Jericho will have his hands full as well as he takes on a man who loves to fight, Ireland’s own Finlay.

    That’s not all though. We will see three semi-final matches Monday for the Fusion and Iron Division Titles. In an Iron Division semi-final match, Bryan Danielson will take on the former WWE Champion, JBL. After knocking off Helms, can the young Bryan Danielson continue to Open Range?

    Also in Iron Division Champion, we’ll see a rematch from last week as Chris Benoit takes on William Regal. Last week’s contest ended in a DQ after Brent Albright attacked Chris Benoit, his former mentor and idol. With Albright not being under contract with the LSW, the question still looms if he’ll make another uninvited appearance.

    Since the LSW started, Christian Cage has proclaimed that he was a “Main Eventer” and that he was above the Fusion Division. LSW Owner Shawn Michaels has given Christian Cage the chance to prove himself, as he’ll be facing Bryan Kendrick in Fusion Division semi-final match in the Main Event on Showdown. Will Captain Charisma be able to keep his word or will The Hooligan put him in his place?

    Speaking of Cage, fellow Fusion Division competitor AJ Styles has taken offense to Cage’s comments against the Fusion Division and its competitors and has challenged Cage to meet him in the ring. This combustible situation is sure to explode Monday.

    Confirmed Matched

    Main Event
    Fusion Division Semi-Final
    Christian Cage vs. Bryan Kendrick

    Iron Division Semi-Final
    Bryan Danielson vs. John Bradshaw Layfield

    Iron Division Semi-Final
    William Regal vs. Chris Benoit

    Finlay vs. Chris Jericho

    John Cena (LSW Heavyweight Champion) vs. Carlito

    Tune in tonight at 9et/8c for Showdown.

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    Parth’s Review

    Hey KJ. I’m here and I’m here to do a MASS REVIEW! That’s right. I’m going to review your whole fed. Enough talk, lets get to it!

    The backstory’s pretty meh, but it gets the point across… HBK’s good for an owner. Can’t wait to see what he can do.

    The Battle at the Alamo is a nice concept. 24 men. 22 Matches. One Champion. My early favorite to win this is Edge, and I’m thinking that it’ll be an Edge/Christian/Cena Final.

    Off to the first House show, and I’m loving the way your going with this, posting as a fan on a message board. It makes it really realistic, and that’s good. I can’t really do a proper review for these house shows, so I’ll just make some comments. Lethal/Danielson sounds like it was a good match, and it was by far the most unpredictable. I wanted Lethal to win, but Danielson pulled out all the stops. Glad he’s a heel. I like that Sting won, but don’t like that you buried Helms. A drunk guy tries to get in the ring. Nice touch. The last match of the night is Cena/Benoit, and while I’d like Benoit to win, I predict that Cena will win, and he does. Good first night, but the bad thing about BIG tournaments like this is that the first round matchups tend to be really predictable, and it sucks that there will be another day of this. But it should pay off as the semifinals and Triple Threat should own.

    Time for Night #2 in San Antonio! Christian defeating Finlay was good, and in real life, I think that would be a good matchup. AJ winning was good, and glad to see that they(AJ and Daniels) are both faces. I figured Regal would defeat Kendrick, as Kendrick is more of a tag team/cruiserweight guy while Regal is more of a technical guy, and it would be a shame to see him lose to Kendrick… I didn’t really care for Striker/Douglas, to be honest. Punk/Noble would’ve owned in real life. Glad to see that you’re doing some stuff wrong on purpose, such as the choosing of CM Punk’s theme. I would’ve loved for you to play his old theme, but oh well. Punk wins. Edge/O’Haire. Good. If O’Haire beat Edge, I would’ve stopped reading your fed right here. Christian, Punk, and Edge, 3 of my favorite wrestlers, win in their respective 2nd round matchups. Nice. Good 2nd show, and can’t wait for the finale tomorrow!

    The last night is starting off with a bang, with a dream match and dream feud of mine! CM Punk vs. Edge! Sounds like it was good, but why the kickouts to the Spear? Are you changing his finisher? Because if you aren’t that’s really weak. At least he won… Edge is in the finals. I’m 1/1! Sting/Christian next! I want Christian to win this. I like the reversal of the Unprettier into the Scorpion Death Drop, but I don’t like that Sting won. 1/2 . Carlito/Cena! I want Cena to win this one, actually. And he does, with the FU! 2/3! And my Champion’s still alive! Time for the finals! I’m hyped. Good match. SPEAR! Damn, but he doesn’t win. Cena pins Edge and wins the title. Damnit. I would’ve rather Sting won than Cena. But holy shit! What’s this?! Damn, someone put a beating on the Champ! I’m guessing it’s Lesnar. NO! It’s Y2J!!! **marks** Shit, Y2J/Cena. Great ending to the tournament.

    HBK to make an announcement on the future of LSW on Showdown! Sounds good…

    I like that you have this new weekly column from HBK. Lets him speak his mind without hogging up too much airtime now that he’s in a non-wrestling role. Interesting that Y2J’s not under contract. Good way to go about with this feud. Just pure hatred. Iron Division Champion and Fusion Division Champion. Sounds like the Intercontinental Champion and the Cruiserweight Champion. Good job, making them both seem equal. I like the limited ropebreak rule and the legal chokeholds for the Iron Division Title. 20 Counts on the floors? Nice. TKO can win a match, and title changes hands on a DQ. The Fusion Division sounds good too. No Countouts. Nice. You called Helms Shane Helms in the Tournament, but now you’re calling him Gregory Helms. Which one is it? This is really fucked up. HELMS is in the Iron Division Tourney, and CHRISTIAN is in the Fusion Title tourney? WHAT THE FUCK?! Christian deserves to be a main eventer, not in the lower midcard. Bad choice. Can’t wait to see what’s happening with the Tag Division.

    Awesome. I kind of like that Christian’s in the Fusion Division now. This storyline looks good. “Midget Division.”

    Oh shit. Regal/Finlay and Lethal/Christian should OWN~!

    Show #1
    Tenay and Heyman. Should make for a good duo. It’s time for HBK! Nice. Putting his ego aside for the sake of the show. Sounds like something Vince would do. Cena comes out and wants Y2J for good reason. I like how you had Y2J come out without music or anything, in regular clothes, with security. Good job making people think that he really isn’t a member of LSW. Jericho cuts a decent promo, talking about unfinished business. Shit. Triple Threat #1 Contender’s Match tonight, and Y2J is signed to an open contract! Sadly, I think Edge will lose to Y2J tonight… But it could open the door for an Edge/Sting feud, somehow, which isn’t bad.

    Time for the first Fusion Division Match! Striker vs. Kendrick! Striker cuts a good promo, but Kendrick goes really out of character in this one. I don’t like it. It would’ve been good if it was someone else, but not Kendrick… Anyway, onto the match. I like you summaries, and I do mine kind of the same way. “Striker quickly grabs Striker’s waits and rolls backwards for the pinning combination.” But Kendrick wins. Nice, because I don’t like Striker. But you really need to brush up on Kendrick’s mic skills, or not have him talk…

    Awesome, just awesome promo by Benoit. I absolutely loved it. Glad to see you pushing him and just making him a monster. Carlito interrupts, and you did a nice job with him too. You know both men very well, and they should have a good match in which I predict Benoit to win…

    I’m indifferent on Jeter. I’ll wait until you debut him to make an opinion.
    Nice match. Benoit wins because Carlito’s out of ropebreaks. Good to see that rule come into effect.

    Great promo with HBK and Edge. You captured both of their characters perfectly. Good job with HBK playing mind games with Edge.

    Damn, Carlito beats down Lethal. Feud, maybe? I hope not…

    Time for Regal/Finlay! Should be a really good match, but you can’t really judge with a summary. Regal wins via TKO! Can’t really rate the matchup, but the ending’s good, and realistic.

    Lethal’s a fighter, but it’s obvious Cage will win because 1. Lethal’s injured and 2. Cage is on a mission, and he won’t lose in the first round of the Tourney. Nice interview by Christian, I see him winning the Title.

    Time for Lethal/Cage! Cage squashes Lethal for the win.

    Nice Sting/Jericho confrontation. Jericho is as cocky as ever, and Sting is just Sting. Main event coming up.

    Cena is a guest announcer for the main event! Lets see if he plays a part in the finish of this matchup. Good matchup, and Jericho uses Edge’s finisher to his advantage for the win! Nice match and nice ending, and the show ends with Cena and Y2J brawling, and having to be broken up by security!

    Overall, I really liked this show. There were a few weird things, but that comes with having rust. For a grade? Hmm… 86/100 Nice job.

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    Nice little recap of the show… I like the headline.

    Edge/Sting feud. I was right. This should be good.

    Time for HBK’s column! Lethal’s out for 3 weeks, I guess his opponent will be Carlito? Tag Champs will be crowned at Open Range and that sounds pretty good.

    Cage promises everyone will suffer. I really like his character in your fed, lashing out because he’s being held back. It fits him well, and I can’t wait to see you give him the main event push he deserves in a few months(I hope you will, at least. )

    Show #2
    Oh shit, you’re going back to the Internet Results Format, but a bit more in detail. Damn, Edge/Sting looks all but confirmed for Open Range. Now it IS confirmed! Damn. Y2J/Cena and Edge/Sting. Those two matches alone make me want to order the PPV. Ohhh nice main event. Tag Match. Should own.

    I like the Punk/JBL Confrontation. Gets me hyped for the match tonight.

    Styles/Daniels was virtually identical to their matchup in the LSW Title Tournament. Except for the ending, of course. You can sense the tension, and I’d love another Styles/Daniels feud.

    Lethal’s looking for revenge against Carlito. Damn, Carlito said it perfectly. “That’s not cool.” I’m really not looking forward to this

    Beniot/Regal tonight! Should own.

    Time for JBL/Punk! Damn, Punk loses. That’s really surprising. Decent match, can’t really judge, though.

    Nice London/Kendrick Promo saying that they respect each other even if they have to face each other in the finals of the title tournament.

    Nice little video of Jeter. I’m starting to like him.

    London defeats Shannon Moore, which is good. Nothing more to comment on, really…

    Nice promo with Helms and Danielson. Looks like this could be a nice feud.

    Why write in the fan’s perspective when it’s the official LSW.com results? That should only happen when it’s results on a message board, or an internet news site. Not LSW’s official site. But anyway, Jericho attacks Cena, and HBK adds a stip to their match! Damn, neither man can lay a hand on each other before Open Range. That should add an extra bit of tension.

    Time for Benoit/Regal! An attack on Benoit! It’s Brent Albright! Damn, Albright/Benoit at Open Range? Looks likely… And once again with the fan’s perspective.

    Shannon Moore’s crying. Yay?

    Time for Danielson/Helms! Good match from what I read, and Danielson wins! But I still don’t agree with Helms being in the Iron Division Tourney in the first place.

    Nice backstage promo with Jericho and Edge. You can sense some tension, but they both have one common goal. To beat Cena and Sting. But I think the faces will be the winners when the show is said and done.

    And they are. Cena pins Jericho! Damn, didn’t think that would happen, but at least Edge didn’t get pinned by Cena for the 3rd time in 2 weeks. Cena and Sting celebrate to end the show.

    DARK MATCH~! Edge/Sting. Sting wins, faces always win the dark matches. Oh well… Edge will own at Open Range, though.

    Overall, this was a better show than your first, but I hope all your shows aren’t like this. I’m confused. Why’d you make your first show full length and your 2nd just results? But overall, good show. 87/100

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    Nice, you show some vids. The promos were nice, and I especially liked the Edge one. Sting/Edge have good chemistry.

    Cage/AJ? Fucking PRO!

    Yes, Albright did make a statement, but I sure hope you don’t have him go over Benoit in their first encounter…

    Time for HBK’s column! Nice idea for the Tag Titles. Wonder how you came up with that. Albright not under contract either? Wow. That can’t be how you explain everyone’s debut.

    Oh shit, a new superstar. I think it’s Brock Lesnar, but I thought the guy who attacked Y2J was Lesnar too, so it probably isn’t. Triple H, maybe?

    O’Haire? Good Riddance. Holly? Same instinct. Noble? Meh. He’s really good, but i’ve never really been a fan, so I don’t really care.

    My predictions are that Cage, JBL, Regal, Y2J, and Cena will win their respective matches. Looks like a good next show. I’ll definitely be reading!

    There you have it, KJ! The MASS REVIEW~!

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    Sunday, May 6th, LSW Open Range comes to you LIVE from the Alamo in San Antonia, Texas.
    (Note: I need a “fresh start” so to speak, so I’m starting from what would be my first PPV, skipping two weeks of shows. Don’t worry, because I’ll have recaps for all matches.)

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