RT my main man it feels like forever since I last reviewed NEW. I've been a fan of this fed since you started it last year and a big part of that is the prominent usage of Rob Van Dam. RVD is headlining your biggest show, and going in as the World Champ, C'MON! I'm all over this. Punk vs Van Dam is a fucking dream match! Lets do it.
Awesome, very well timed video. Great opening my man. Set the stage that this is the grandaddy of 'em all for this fed. A monumental show. I'm pumped!
Love these videos.
Opening match starts off a little on the sleepy side. Not expecting a whole lot out of this opener, just a good warm up for the show. It starts picking up when you get to this stuff:
...but Hart ducks! He dodges the lariat and boots Windham in the gut..
...DDT!! Hart plants Windham with a DDT and both men are down and out!
I love that little style that you have when you write a match out. That DDT just felt like such a big deal just with the way you spaced that sentence and wrote it all out here like this. The entire tide of the match has turned with a simple, yet brutally devastating move and you put that over perfectly.
THWACK!! Awesome match. New champs. It got off to a slow start but turned into a 3 star opener with some really good writing. Your matches are just awesome. Feels like I'm reading a comic book or something, which is a good thing.
Pretty good booking man. Bro Canada finally get the straps. I don't think anybody can touch you when it comes to writing and booking tag teams. Bar none. I can't even think of anyone that really even comes close. WMS maybe? Not really.
Wow, this Styles vs Strong match just reads to be a fucking scrap. You really put some emotion into this match. It feels like there's a some legit hate here between the competitors.
I would have liked for this one to go a little longer really. I felt like the heat was starting to really pick up right when you cut it off. The finish was well set up, but it just felt a little anticlimactic maybe. I think this match could have went longer and would have been a lot better than it is. Right when I was getting into it all of a sudden Styles gets caught and it's over. Really good match though as it is. I'd give it a 3 star rating.
Strong had to win this one so I really like the way you set it up with the booking of this feud. You built it up to where this win would really mean something.
Man I've never been real impressed with Kingston until I seen this vid. He's one hell of a character. You should have won fed of the year last year on these videos alone.
Robbed! I'll never be able to compete with this. I would give my right arm to be able to make videos like this. Do you want another right arm RT?
Oooh, yeah this is a good one right here. Second paragraph was brilliantly written. Generico is getting a beating here, love the desperation elbow giving this little hero just a small little glimmer of hope. A chance. A prayer. Could he pull it off?!?! OH THE PSYCHOLOGY!
Poor guy couldn't do it. Damn. Who's next?
Sydal does a little better, but he's KTFO'D! Shit.
Man, he's such a monster here. That was perhaps the best match of the night with Prince Devitt so far. I can't get enough of the way you write in the near falls and false finishes into a match. This one was classic RT match writing and I loved it man.
OH! AJ Styles getting his heat back by taking out a man that just went 3-0, MY GOD MAN! You are a genius. Fuck AJ Styles. I'm chanting along with this crowd.
Such a bitch move to use a weapon AND
attacking him from behind. I swear man, wrestling booking is like a science. You got it down for sure.
Oh he gets a shot! NO!
Strong is BACK! HA! I love this man. That was overall one of the, no fuck that, That was THE best booked segment in all of fan fic this year. I'm downright inspired.
MAN! I just want to skip ahead and read Punk vs RVD SO BAD!
Short filler cool down match. No quarrels with this one.
The RVD/Stevie dialogue. Lovely man. Good times right here.
I'll be honest with you I'm kind of skimming through this tag match here because I can't wait to read RVD/Punk.
The Men of Low Moral Fiber are strait money though. Chuck Taylor needs to be signed to the WWE ASAP. They need to copy this fan fic as far as what to do with him.
The CHAIRSHOT! I Feel IT!
I like the usage of the chair in this match. Easy to read, crazy battle.
Galloway and Tyler Black, I'll slow down for this feud. Some of the best written matches in all of fan fic last year. I have high expectations for this one.
When did this become a Street Fight? I missed that. I've missed a lot here lately to be honest.
Oh man, solid gold here with the opening of this match. Fiery exchange of punches, a mad scramble, I can feel it. Flying knee from the ladder, +1.
Blood already. Is this the new match of the year? So far yes, yes it is.
My attention starts to wander about mid-way, this may just be my short attention span, but I'm starting to drift.
Galloway's comeback gets me back in it. Spitting blood as he screams at him while slamming his head back into the floor. I feel the hatred. Now we're going backstage. This is what a fucking street fight should be by GOD!
We're not just gratuitously bleeding here, it's masterfully used in this match. The little images of blood flying from Galloway's mouth as he screams at him, the wiping on the concrete, it's just unsettling. I'm getting those uneasy feelings that one should get when they watch
a bloody match. This is a sign of some great writing.
Oh my god this is one of the best brawls I've ever read. The little details of their surroundings and the destruction. The description of the setting. All amazing. This transcends "a cool fan fic match" and just goes into just being something awesome to read period.
Pallet spot. Not overdone, but still put over to do some serious damage. I miss the long white spaces for near falls. I know this is something that both of us have been heavily criticized for using in the past but I really loved the way you used that in your past shows. Wouldn't have minded it here. When you can read something that puts you on the edge of your seat that's just awesome to me, and that's what those long spaces(or spoilers) do for me. I know they aren't popular but I like them.
Car window and we have a full on crimson mask. This isn't for the weak. This is a fucking battle!
My god man. That was a 4 1/2 star match without a doubt. Truly an epic brawl. I'm inspired. I'll tell you what though, I think the big spaces you used to do for near falls would have made this better. I'm already missing those.
Gawd damn! Man. Pretty good undercard. It's going to be hard for you to top that last match.
This is what I've been waiting for right here.
RVD's intro. The champ. Pantera. Nobody can compete with this. Lovely man.
I think I like your Dean better than the WWE Dean, and that's saying something because they are really doing well with The Shield right now imo.
Dueling chants! AH! YES! Fuck you WWE! I got fan fic.
I'm getting sad already just a couple of paragraphs into this. RVD can't compete with this kid. He's a totally new kind of animal. My how the times have changed. It's kind of crazy really.
This is just such a big fight, I'm getting those Rock vs Hogan type vibes. Punk working the submissions to slow RVD down. RVD totally seems like the type of dude that would just get owned in a strait grappling match, he's just a striker. Pretty good psychology going on here.
Van Dam lands a shot and slowly starts working his way back into the match.
It's not to be. Punk is just so dangerous.
AH FUCK! Frogsplash into the Anaconda Vise! SHIT!
The same arm that Punk has been working on. It doesn't look good.
Damn, I thought it was over. This is fantastic man. That was a good false finish.
WHA! RVD RETAINS!?!?
AMBROSE! FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
This is solid gold.
Motherfuck you RT.
Show of the year.